Could be improved
This was alright but could have been better, the backrounds were ok though and i was mildly entertained but the humor was more disturbing then funny, with all the said, maybe you should rework this one out, abut more humor, more effort and detail on the backrounds allthough they were not as bad. anyways good luck on your next flash.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested that you could change a few things like the backrounds, some more added humor and so on,
somewhat disturbing, but still somehwta entertaining.
where is the next one. PLEAS MAKE ANOTHER. 9/10 for length
not this time, you really just went too far for it to be funny, and I'm talking like in more ways than one, the humour went way down hill here, and the overall creativity as well.
bad graphics, bad animations, no voice acting. but nice backgrounds, and good choice of music. but the overall impression of this submission is bad.
Unfortunately, the main problems that plagued the first flash are still evident in full force, yet again, in #3. It's a shame since there are times where the graphics and animation is really good, yet there are other times where it's really poor. What I hope to see out of you in the future is consistency, make it so that everything's good the whole way through, this way people aren't turning it off halfway.