Nice Satire

I loved your input in those Max Payne "slides," as I lol'd the minute I heard "vibrating Beretta" or "injectable Viagra."

The pace was a little slow for my taste, but it wasn't much of a bother---I was too busy laughing!!!

Nice flash, I hope you make much more just like this!!!

another well done chapter :D:D

and funny as hell :D again a great job

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OMG I LOLD SO HARD I FELL OFF MY CHAIR!!!

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i cant stop laughing lolololololol!!!

Too funny!

"Perhaps I shouldn't have both a vibrating beretta"
XD!!!!
I loved every second of it