Well
The file size was WAY to big so it isn't really worth it,but it also was a little choppy you should fix those and it will get a way better score
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I understand that most people may not like it, but it's a short mellow movie. This is my VERY FIRST flash movie, so please be considerate in your reviews.
Thanks guys!
BradenTheJew responds:
Thanks for pointing that out. I did try to fix it... but obviously I'm a beginner and I couldn't get it to work.
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Its spelled color, not colour. your not special because of that
mellow yellow
I enjoyed it. It was a real nice composition with the music and the poem.
It would be real good if you used more realistic colouring as the sun comes up (red/pink glows). This can quite easy to do with big gradiated circles, and gradual colour changes.
BradenTheJew responds:
Thanks for the advice. I'm glad to see you liked it... you may be the only one... lol
not great
well the graphics were alright, but the rest of it wasn't exactly that great. nice try though.
Good Work, nice style! :)
This flash was infact very mellow, and because of that, I enjoyed it! You're drawings also prove that not all art needs outlines to be spiffy. ;) Good work.
Cheers