It was okay!
It was okay!
I know this has it's origin in 2004, but perhaps you'll read this eventually. You've got such talent here! It's a little slow and you don't deliver anything, a place like NG demands something happen - on a personal website a cliffhanger like that can stand up, but not in a 'everything for itself' portal like this. So you need to have had something happen, like just sit on it a bit longer and have done that next segment, then leave it on the 2nd cliffhanger.
Looks like you're a programmer too - if you've lost sight of flash these last years, have a think about coming back to it as a hobby - this shows real promise, kinda stink to see it not developed.
Most series go unloved until there's actually 3-4 behind them, so you've just got to have some perserverance getting it off the ground.
I hate you. jk.
You left a good cliffhanger and I had to give you a 5 so I could see the sequel. But, even without that it really is a good movie. Just, not 5 worthy. Good technique though with the suspence.
To start off, Elizibeth bears an amazing resemblance to a friend I know. Knowing that this friend isn't bright enough to work with script like that, and has an identical stare with Elizibeth stopped me from taking this seriously. I laughed half the time. The expressions are extremely realistic, and this is the first decent computer-related story I've seen. The audio was crisp and clear, and fit perfectly. I await more episodes! This is shown to be a promising series. And I'd like to see how Elizibeth got in her environment- the cliche` gray room with no apparent entrance, exit, or windows. Keep it coming- you're doing well.
A bit overdone, but promising
Too dramatic for an intro. I need to know something about what's going on before I'm disturbed by an IM. The animation is just too serious at this point. I look forward to future episodes. Good start.