It wasn't really bad, but you need a few things. 1) a script so you know exactly what the hell you're gonna say and 2) a faster rate of speech to make it sound REALLY funny. Keep up the ok work.
Over all it sucked, but I did have a few laughs. especially the falco part where he hates fox cause it's so true. You got everything in there too, and slippy is a pussy.
This Nutshell stuff makes me laugh!! Heh! Star Fox is awsome.
Could of been better...
You should speed up everything about 10x... it would be a whole lot more funny... otherwise good job
that pretty much sums it up