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The Jedi

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Well I started animating again, this time without sprites so plz excuse some of the crappy animation. I am planning to make a series based on this but I wanted to get some input from the viewers before I started so I made this trailer, hope you all like it. Plz don’t hesitate to tell me what I could do different to make it better, and if your just gonna bitch about it, do us all a favor and save the fucking kb.

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Decent stuff, certainly.

The animation was of a decent quality. A little patchy at points, perhaps, but there's no doubting it worked quite well. The drawing themselves were nice, I'll give you that, but they didn't flow as well as they could have. No biggy, however.

The sound, I liked it. Not loved, mind you, liked. I thought it was going well at the start, the slow, slightly melodramatic star wars music went well with the whole "What if you didn't know who you were ?" thing. However, I was slightly dismayed when it burst into techno. Not to say that it didn't work, it did, but I felt that perhaps a better choice could have been made. What ? I don't know, but it could have been done, none the less.

The violence, well, that wasn't really that great. The fights looked slow and patchy. Perhaps they could have done with an increase in frame rate ? Whatever. There was no real violence, per se, in this movie. By that I mean, no hardcore blood and gut type stuff. But don't get me wrong, that's not a bad thing. Not at all. After all, they were robots, I'm just explaining why I scored it relatively low for violence.

Interactivity and humour, both at 0. Well, that's mainly because it was neither interactive, nor funny. Obviously it was a movie, not a game, so interactivity was never going to be at 10, but the only interactive part here was the play button. Again, not a bad thing in the slightest. As I said, it's a movie. No humour, either, but then again, I doubt you intended it to be a laugh a minute rollercoaster. Don't worry, neither of these effected your overall score.

Overall, there's not too much I can say really. It was a decent animation. Above average ? Yes, actually, it probably was. However, I felt it could flow better at parts, if you catch my drift. Well, there you have it, a solid 6 out of 10. Go you.

u screwed it up

the beggening wen it said "what if u woke up and didnt kno who u were" and stuff, that was good, but u screwed the rest up. 2 bad, this coulda ben a good movie

WOW

it's hard for me to beleive this is still on newgrounds, it's weak, the only thing that you spent time on is drawing backround and charactors (and that wasn't even very impressive). And you got lazy when it came to movement. I hope all your movies aren't this bad.

Hear that, it sounds like my soul dying.

You should have called this homo with a sword fighting off segway scooters with hands. Thank you for making me hate Star Wars for just a moment. Oh, and my friend says you are a gaybie.
Love forever, your admirer,
Tooleye

you know what they say about sequals

it was okay but how are you going to make a series about a jedi who decide to boldy say "screw you"/?

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2.09 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 22, 2004
11:47 AM EST