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This is part one of a three part series I am currently working on. I hope you enjoy it.
I love it when an author makes a different type a movie. Previously, you had just been submitting comedies, but in this, there is drama, violence, etc. While the synching needs some work, I found the character designs were pretty good. The movie itself had a nice epic feel to it, mixes with some comedy and a lot of drama, you have contributed to some of better work on Newgrounds. Good work, very entertaining.
Ok I'll start with the positives. You more than obviously have a good sence of background music and dramatic sounds. Your overall sound effects were not bad in their own. You have a very most excellent ability to create backgrounds and scenery, however your drawing of people and horses and the trolls is left to be desired. When, what I guess to be Gilgor's father, and all the other trolls, all looked like they were stressing to talk. And I really dont like you you just made: Top lip/bottom lip/left and right cheeks and just motion tweened them for when you wanted to talk, it looks very choppy, cheesy and lame in my own opinion. And lose the 2-D faces if you are going to make other things 3-Dish man. You obviously have no idea how to blend colours on the people, seeing their stomachs be a completly different "radial-colour" than the chest piece looks very stupid. Another thing you could have done to improve it is either get some better quality humor or lose it completely, trying to encorporate humor into it not only made it lame, but lost the mood. Unlike our friend below, i managed to drop your score by.01
yo man i loved the music and the voices good job, btw whoa i raised ur score by .03 didn't know my voting power was that high lol
al sharpton? are you serious? anyway.....
it seems a little cheesey but its not too bad not one that i will be inclined to watch again.
Vote Al Sharpton!
Awesome movie, vote Al Sharpton, hell of funny. I really liked the voices good job.
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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