Not bad, could be longer and so much more other improvements. But still I've given you a 3! Most people are lucky to get a 1 from me. But good try, you should continue with your flash!
that tickled my insides
no saving grace at all
This is just gay, and the only way you'll like it is if your gay too.
I was disgusted but it was funny.
ewwwww blarghhhhh! that is so gross! i almost threw up...