I really liked the storyline to this, as well as the graphical and sound effects, they were great too! You talked too close to the microphone I think, it was a bit unclear and loud/soft at times, as in it would jump different volumes at times.
The scream was really loud, and I didnt even have my volume on that loud. The graphics just needed to be tidied up a bit.
You need to work on...
COnstructive yet friendly critism from someone who has never managed to make a successful animation.
Your storyline was good, and sound effects were great too! but you talked too close to the mic! that scream was litterally painful... not to mention at a low volume you could hear it in the next neighborhood.
The Graphics, man... if they were better you would have had front page!! I kid you not, you made a B on this like a 3.17, if you would have done those two things differantly we might be seeing you on the top of all times list with the great Legendary frog! :)
lol that was funny!
make another one!
Homes, sweet. Improve that sound, and you'll be great. At first, animation sketchy, then i realized it was all your style! Keep it up!
I laughed a bit
The ball pit part was the funniest. However, the sound was TERRIBLE. I had to cover my ears several times to mute the horrendous screams the fat guy made