an improvement, but...

Now there's even less animation then before. A tip: do frame by frame. And remember: movement is fluid, and people have joints. Meaning, if you are moving, chances are, you move more then one body part.

example: when you reach for a can, you bend your arm up, extend your fore arm out, open you hand, and grab it. FBF allows you to make your animation look more fluid and realistic. Tween is better for backgrounds, and small movements, like moving your eye, or zooming in or out of a scene.

For example: tweening just one part of an arm makes it look clunky, and robot. FbF, even tho the arm is the only part moving, since it is impossible to perfectly redraw each frame, the characters whole body appears to slightly move a few centimeters. This flawed motion actually looks more natural and even tho it's harder work, it will make your animations look ALOT more professional.

Plus, if you ever get a tablet, it'll be even easier to do FbF. Anyway, not bad, but next time, more animation, and check out my review of your first gaia blade anim for more tips. Not bad.

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You are probably aware of it already, but I will inform you anyway. When you press the next button, sometimes two lines of text pass without clicking it twice. I am not big on the next button, I like the idea of not having to click to advance. The animation style is much better than your first animation. The characters look a lot better, although there is a lot less movement. Also, a much more acceptable file size.

Ryan

Some flaws:

There quite a few typos in your story. And the sentence-structure and flow is severely... retarded.
It needs a lot of re-wording and re-structuring.

But it's a good story. Hopefully episode two will flow more, have voice sounds, and action as well.

Good start.

wow...

like shadowblade187 said, this is like a beginning to a game

not bad

it's kinda like the beginning 2 a game lol