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The Vortex Ep 4

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Feb 12, 2004 | 12:52 AM EST

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The Vortex Episode 4 (The Dream)

If you have not seen any of the vortex series and To better understand this story it would be better to start with Episode 1
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=135654 or just look for it in my movie section of my profile...

AUDIO BY:
Intro music: blue eyes - limp RMX", by czer323 (NG4348)
The Dream: "TheComet-New Beggining", by TheComet (NG6033)

My (18th) Movie

~XwaynecoltX~

Reviews


Golden-cometGolden-comet

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

nice movie

but the thing is...how do you do all these flash and 14k reviews! That comes as a great mystry to me.


XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review

~X~


ImacowImacow

Rated 3 / 5 stars

ok

-GOOD-
well it was longer then the last movie, so thumbs up. the graphics were the same but still good. the sound was still good and fit well.

-BAD-
well the story ended crappily and from what i see there isn't a vortex episode 4


XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review

~X~


BoBadManBoBadMan

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Once again you can see the improvement.

But its still not perfect, although its really starting to take off. I know its a good story because I find myself wondering what will happen to him next, and really wishing that the whole thing was longer. More work is needed, but this is by no means the worst flash cartoon series I have seen.


XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review

~X~


NasFlashNasFlash

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Could have beena lot better

Very short, you could have combined this a nd ep3 into one animations, again graphics arent great and that music is badly looped, could have done with voices as well.


XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review

~X~


TigerChickTigerChick

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

better

Hmm i have to agree with ramagi on this one - there really isnt any point to having this into a seperate submission, you could ahve combined all 4. In fact, i dont see any point to it other than to get your submission amount up. But the best one and a nice one to finish "The Vortex" up :)
Graphics were sitll basicly the same andim kind of dissapointed you hadnt taken suggestions and made these graphics look a little less MS Paint-iah by now, as those brown lines on the gorund in this really annoy me. I also noticed there are sitll no voiceovers. However, the music was much better and more dramatic and suitable this time and the plot was much better so this gets decent score from me now.
But it will never get a 8 or 9 unless you take suggestions and clean this up a little bit, continue the Vortex in a newly enhanced version :)

You have just been reviewed by
~T_C


XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review

~X~