The Vortex Episode 3 (Journey thru The Land)
If you have not seen any of the vortex series and To better understand this story it would be better to start with Episode 1
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=135654 or just look for it in my movie section of my profile...
Episode 3: Jax is saved by his new friend and on a new journey across the land, This was more of a inbetween episode which means not much happens but still part of the story that needs to take place...
This episode is really short it was part of Episode 2, but got put off, so i made it into part 3, also may seem abit bigger in file size due to new graphics and such.
Some of the animation is abit choppy, Ep 3 is with some more interesting and new style of graphics with the skylines and all, also starting with ep 3 it will be 16Fps instead of the normal 12Fps,
AUDIO BY:
Intro music: blue eyes - limp RMX", by czer323 (NG4348)
Other Music: by RyeGuyHead (5441)
Enjoy this episode 3 of the vortex, feel free to review and tell me what you think dont forget to checkout the other episodes...
My (17th) Movie
~XwaynecoltX~
no..
-GOOD-
graphics were ok and sound was good also
-BAD-
well the movie was way to short definitly, this realy pissed me off. its just a 30 second movie of him riding in a ship thingy, oh well theres only 1 more episode.
-OVERALL-
good graphics but way way way way way way way way way to short
Getting there.
This was better than the episodes before it, but it was very short. Its clear to me that the graphics are improving and I liked the music. Especially the acoustic in the beginning.
Not great
Was very short, the music you used isnt looped very well at all, your graphics have gotten a bit better since the earlier episodes, keep it up.
greadually getting there...
This was slightly better than the previous, I mean the one before didnt even have music at the beginning.
It was nice you had a recap option that really helped you remember what happened quickly and eaisly, and the presentation of "The Vortex" is gradually getting better. Graphcis were still really the same and there sitll WERE NO voiceovers and the music still did not fit, in fact the only thing that makes each episode worse or better is the storyline, and it should also be about improvement and progress. Slightly better but i thought the best one also was the shortest though. well done :)
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Better
This one is better than the last. You could have had a little more in this esp this one almost too short. I thought you did a good job with this.
