Nice action

This one has some nice action in it, love some of the fancy effects and such in this, the artwork is really good and the animation is smooth, you have a decent flick here, and as for improvement , anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I will suggest some voice dialog to make the story have more drive.

~X~

hmm...

Well, here are some pointers:

do frame by frame.(only tween for backgrounds or small movements) and use the brush tool instead of the line tool.(even for blood, which should be more broken up into individual particals(like any liquid) instead it came down in a big chunk, which is unrealistic)) Art is a 6(slightly above average, not bad) Keep practicing. Wasn't half bad. Good job for a beginner.

Not Bad

Not bad, Not Good but still fairly good, Good humor but at some points very predictable

Nice!

I was expecting to see some sprites, and am glad I didnt see any ;).
This is definatley a quality flashwork.
I love all of those classic anime effects you see on all of those TV shows... an example being the single massively oversized sweat running down the guys head.
Nice job all around, I liked it!

5

YEAH! ANIME! Ok, just kidding. A little on the slow slide, you should really increase the speed of the cahracters and add some sound effects. An example is in the opening scene, the creature hardly has any sound. For such a huge file size, I was half-expecting a full-length song. Even on low, this was choppy an dslow. The characters themselves look alright. I would really recommend not having the whole "anime peace sign/pause for 20 seconds bit". It made the movie seen slow and long, when the object is to keep someone entertained. Were you trying to bring humor into the movie by having a guy murder a dog for peeing on him? Lame.

Ryan