Nice work Noddle!

This animation has some very cool style. It was well thought out, and the imagery was very dramatic, even if the graphics and animation themselves were a bit simplistic. That is definately allowable though, being that this is only your second animation. The animation was very well synched with the music, which helped complete the dark feeling of lonelyness. The only thing I thought was a bit weird, was how the sword randomly appeared out of nowhere. As for the m bird, I actually felt that it was fitting when put into the context of the entire graphical style. :D Keep up with the nice work. You should look into spending more time on all the small graphical details, and then more people will appreciate the great style and plot you have to offer.

Good job.

Nice work.Its a shame there are not alot of people who produce flash works along this kind of style and flair.

I like your style.

I started off a bit like you. My first movie, well, it wasn't blammed but it got a low grade. Everyone said "GRAPHICS SUCK! PLOTLINE TOO CONFUSING FOR MY NON-EXISTANT BRAIN"! Grrrr. But then, I got better and my third movie got to the front page! So keep your chin up. Make something that will really amaze people. See, your style, you've got it down. But since it's original, most people can't accept it, they see it as too simple.
I would suggest you change your style to something less...well...passive. The blood-thirsty people of Newgrounds like action, funny, and, uh, other stuff. See, to get noticed you can either go all out on the graphics or on the funny. This is all my opinion so you don't have to follow it. I gave you a 10 for inspiration, I can see great things in you... don't give up. It's good to expirement though.

interesting

interesting concept, had potential, but is too short.

And Now For Something Completely Different..

The Graphics were not great, but the presentation was terrific. It was weird and erie, something new for me to see at newgrounds. Good Job. Gave it a 5 for Originality.