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Beta 2

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Cool part 2

Glad to have seen this, even if it was atad late me catching up to it lol, Love the different "SCENES" in this and the "MUSIC" was pretty good and fit well, you bring a good story to the table, as for the subtitles I think the "FONT" should be larger somewhat, anyways nice flick here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good flick I think the subtitles are a great touch but the font could be larger, other then that this was cool.

~X~

:P

that was f#$%in awsome

Hmmm...

Well. Stick figures....were all getting sick of them i think. My friend you need more sound effects. Your story telling is top notch. Your microphone is terrible but im sure you knew that. hella scratchy. Your choise of music was pretty good. i dunno...more than i could do. Okay im outta here.

And now for something completely different

There isn't a weak point in the movie at all so good job. However there is nothing that makes it squeaky clean or highly refreshing. Nor does it sway with new ways of creating animations. So in one hand you've made a quality movie, but on the other hand that doesn't make it any more deserving than another movie with your elements.

The reason for its vote will be based on voice acting (which is good); length (which is expected in a time of good votes) and interaction with the person. Many must learn interaction with the watchers isn't all about buttons. Its about thoughts. I knew what to expect here, least most of it. Some things just a little too cheap to even bother remembering.

So what will Beta 3 consist of? Decision making ideas would be a nice starter. Better bodies also, not that there is anything wrong with a stick figure, right? And perhaps some humor. You know...laughing kind.

Abbot-Flash responds:

Would you believe this was my 3rd Flash Animation. So my style has changed alot since then.

Cant wait for number 3!

I know this is goning to be a good series cant wait for beta 3

Abbot-Flash responds:

Neither Can I

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4.06 / 5.00

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Jan 26, 2004
1:27 PM EST