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speakers dont work so no sound

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BOO

i hated it

Not very good

Wash, rinse repeat.

not bad start

Hey man...not a bad start....i just got a couple of tips for ya...keep the text up longer...i didnt finish sometimes...and also put some sound in it man...either some crazy ass techno...or some real rap shit

TypeAliasHere responds:

thanks for the review
and for telling me what needs changing and not just saying its shit
thanks again for pointers

Not a bad start!

Well, it needs sound, and narration slowed down, but apart from that, a good idea for a film.
Note that it _does_ need work, but you already know that.

Keep at it, Invincible.

TypeAliasHere responds:

thanks for the review

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1,690
Votes
4
Score
1.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 24, 2004
12:46 PM EST