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Hey Brother,
Well i'll say it was a good idea, but the way you have presented the flash seems to be completely wrong... for example something like this would normally be classable as comedy? babies killing eachother... But that sort of concept is locked out by certain things, for example the music was a chilling theme, not something you would put into something like this in my personal opinion, Second the voices were a bit quick, not too much bother and also they were deep. What you want to do is record the voices but speed them up to make them sound more like children's voices. Incase you don't know how just use the "Sound Recorder" provided with all windows computers (Start Menu > All Programs > Accessories > Entertainment > Sound Recorder) Or if you don't have a windows computer, then perhaps freeware recording programs such as "Audacity" (http://audacity.sourceforge.net/down load/) Thats a great program that =D. And now on the lighter side of things i have to say that was a good flash! i've mentioned what i think could be improved, but of course with problems come's the posotives aswell! it was creative, also imaginative and slightly random. For example in daycare i wouldn't expect you would find an oven or a sharp kitchen knife =P, then again i've not seen the whole world so i guess that could be arguable, Also GREAT emphasis on the retardation =P the counting scene, been used alot yet lets face it, its still funny =P, and the gangster look at the start with the baby in the Daiper/Nappy (American Word for it/British Word for it) Well brother, I eagerly await any sequal =P,
Keep up the work bro! catch ya later!