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black pact - part one

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this is my first flash movie, i wish you will enjoy, maybe i will make more.


im sorry this is a big files

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sucks more than the clippers

what the fuck was that!!! I just wasted a part of my life watching this!!! thanks a lot!!!!

nice

for a first movie it was great, but some parts need improving, but that will come with time, it was some quite nice work, just be sure to fix up some of the graphics, some of the lighting is wrong, just keep at it and you will get better

outstanding for a first flash

i thought your flash was awsome, i wouldn't worry what people say because most first flashes dont even compare to yours
keep up the good work, i gave you a 5

interesting

nice sound.
The dark cloud following the guy in was a nice touch.

The pacing was really slow in parts, so a lot of people will lose interest. Figure out how to get your play button to work, dude :)

The Macintosh Computer Hater Says....

man, that was really slow-going. i was waiting for something to happen, and when it finally did happen I wasn't sure that it actually occured. and you were right, the graphics were pretty blah. but mostly, i just can't figure out who the shrouded guy is. is he an alien or an evil monk? i was even more confused when his face basically transformed and changed shape completely. then i was totally lost when things that looked like transporter beams appear out of nowhere and the guy and bed disappear.

this flash was bad not just for the bad art, but also because of the bad storytelling and composition. when i can't tell if the guy is an evil monk or an alien, that's bad.

Credits & Info

Views
1,835
Votes
15
Score
3.71 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 3, 2004
2:43 AM EST