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The Dangers Of Diving

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Another submission i have worked really hard on. If you dont like it please give a reason why. Happy viewing!

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Sorry, but it sucked...
-Some buttons didnt work (do you know how to make buttons? Do you remember the hit-field??)
-The sound sucked... Great sound fx, but the sounds where sometimes not well chosen, or the sound just stopped (like the second "scene"; 1st you see a diver with great bg music of an ocean, but after one loop it already stopped)
-Sometimes stickmen just (dis)appear at the middle of the screen or something)
-Anyway, nice try, but if you just take time to understand things of flash it would be much and much better

Greetz

For the humour....

This was entertaining. Graphics and bugs aside (Some of the buttons don't work very well due to the fact you have to hit them precisely or they don't activate) I enjoyed the humour in it, although there where more opportunities to add more that you didn't take advantage of. For example the last one seemed as if it was slightly rushed. Well done.

good

Good graphics. I liked how you drew that swimming pool area. The diving in the pool one was good as is... didn't expect the diving board to do that. The scuba diving part was a little slow when you had to watch him swim for awhile with nothing happening... just needed to be a little shorter. The skydiving one was a bit too short and predictable, maybe something different happening to him would be funnier or unexpected. Seems like you put a lot of work into this, it had 3 parts to it. Keep it up!!

Quit funny

This is a good way to kill a few minutes.

Some tips for the future..

I liked it, great movie, good job man.
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1. Dont get tired at end, go hard all the way through the movie.

2. Make a better ending, credits, thanks to, not just your name.

3. Spend some more time on the drawgins, stick figures, the car, add some effects.

If you would have done that you would have at least recieved a 3.30+

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Views
3,055
Votes
21
Score
3.02 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 30, 2003
6:06 PM EST
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