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Stick Combat:1

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A mortal combat take off. Please note, this is my movie no one make any take offs!

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not shit.
a lot of room for improvement though, so I hope you outdo yourself
next time and become big time in the future, plus make it longer.

(check 12 principles of animation, study impact frames, anticipation and drag, also smears, those are the areas in need of most attention, so don't rush it)

:O

I'm afraid to say that the movie you animated didn't really appeal to me. It was a little to short, and the fights didn't go on long enough. They were practically about 5 secs long. But i know how hard flash can be when you're a beginner, soooo... Yeah. Try and put in a little more effort in next time. Maybe next time you could also put in a background? Like a factory setting, or a forest setting, or a sumo ring.

Other than all that, 'twas fine. GO STICKFIGURES!

dude...

trust me no one wants to take that from you..its not that great, you should put more effort into it

1)graphics can be improved
2)a better song people would like
3)a little more violence to catch our atention
4)you did not put much style into it, you could work on that
5)it was not funny at all
6)all in all, dont rush on the next one take your time to acually grasp our attention, not put us to sleep with this flash not much worth looking at

umm no

make it worth my time next time

Meh it's okay.

although i think there is room for improvement. well just keep trying i suppose.

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Dec 28, 2003
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