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***Why did I even submit this in the first place??***


I am submitting this for help and/or advice on how I can improve before I make something bigger with it. So please leave a constructive review on what can be done better. It's short but I don't want to make a big one until I get some advice on how to improve. So please leave a constructive review. Thx!

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AWE! cute little floating fists of furry!

I love the style! floating limbs! not the best still. I suggest the little white guy goes of screen after then comes back with a gun and shoots the fuck outta the words "THE END!" ya, that would kickass. and then maybe kick the hell outta some old lady. WOOT! VIOLENCE!

ryguypie responds:

lmao!!! why didnt I think of that lol. check out the series I made for this. weasel and wart.

Well

you could improove it by adding mutiple characters at the same time, moving the floor down a bit so you can make em' jump and maby have some sorta introduction and storyline... i wnat to see what the full one will be like...

ryguypie responds:

The full one ws done a long time ago... check out Weasel and Wart

Umm

Advice: Don't make a "continuation" This is not original. No one will like it. I assure you. I have no idea how this got past judgement. Maybe it was because of it's mediocre graphics. I don't know. That's all some people look for.

ryguypie responds:

actually, I have already made a series. Two episodes a while back and I am please with their scores, 3.5ish for both of them. Apparently there are people who like it.

lol, too bad, it's funny!

Ohhh man, this was way too short, it has one poor piece of action, below par animation and the sound was very poor.

Not good violence, graphics, originallity, it's terrible!

The crummyness of this flash deserves a 10 in humour! LOL!

2/5 because you made me laugh.

Heh!

Pretty good. Has a lot of potential to be a funny short. Well, it IS a funny short. It's good as it is. God knows why it has such a low score. Bastards.

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3,355
Votes
29
Score
2.53 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 17, 2003
1:54 PM EST