i don't get it

Why Ness have to kill himself,and what Paula pretend to do whit Ness.PLEASE AWNSER ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you.and wasn't a bad flash!

Typical...

This is what everyone wants to do when they lose someone like that... we've all been tempted to just jump out that window... but eh... good work for a first run...

I have a few thing i need to say

Ness has a dog and a sister a dad and a mom whare are they also paula lives in twoson and ness in onett that is a long walk she and she dosent know how to teleport and her mom and dad are to busy with the preschool to do anything ness dosent have a house thats that high its only a two story house that wont kill him maybe give him a little cut nothin seriuos NESS IS THE PROTECTOR OF EARTH
Ness battled many a foe and all of them trembled before him he defeated Giygas AND Pokey it just dosent make sence damn it and why was his shirt see through?

No.

That was awful. There was no meaning, it didn't even seem like you were trying. The quality was horrible, you at least could've made the characters sprites move. You've made Earthbound fans everywhere cry a little more today.

Needs work...

...a lot of work needed actually. Definitely work on sprite movement and sound need to be incorporated. Secondly, plot needs to be expanded and developed. If you take the time to fix this, this would be kick ass, but as it stands, it is lacking badly.