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i really like the menu so i hope you gonna like it DuDe...
spend more time on this.
too short, needs more options, needs more explanation of what the hell just happened, needs to explain why hes in jail, needs better grammer and a note to everybody reading this i am very partial to weird stick animation style and if you dont like that style than it gets a 1 for style instead of a 10.
Needs more time
You can see that youve spent a lot of time making this but you need to improve things like simple spelling errors, out of place writing, things like that, its a decent engine, but at the moment it looks noobish.
yeah i know, every single flash game/movie i uploaded on newgrounds = when i was a noob at flash ^_^ but i barely upload any of them anymore i started to go youtube instead ^_^
Make the other one, this is a cool series, but this was too short.
i know.. it was really really short.. and the next one i have made.. Had been deleted on my comp... So maybe someday i make the next one..
Needs a lot of work.
People should stop submitting stick animations with no point.
why?... do you hate stick animations or what?
- Use better graphics. Add detail.
- Explain the story. In a lot of your work, you just throw the viewer into the situation. Sometimes that's exciting. Other times it's confusing. For now, explain the situation until you become a better storyteller.
- Spellcheck, spellcheck. Are you learning English at school? Ask your teacher to check your work.
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