About Fonts...
Generally it's acceptable to use 2 different fonts in any certain project: One Serif or gaudy font such as you have used already, and a san-serif, which is a font without any little flourishes. The Gaudy font should really only be used for Titles, and possibly subtitles, because if they're used for normal reading, they can be very hard to follow, which is the case in this flash. The font used for the dialogue here is somewhat hard to read, and the really gothic font you use at the beginning doesn't work at all when you're telling us about the next episode.
Also, "firmiliar" should be "familiar", "I've", not "i've". "You've losed your sword" could possibly be better worded as "You've LOST your sword"
Anyway, good luck with your flash, and I look forward to your next one. =)