That seriously creeped me out...

The crying scared the hell out of me... I'm not going to sleep tonight! THANKS! Anyways... I give it a meh/10... It would have been fun to have opened the portal... Whatever...

needs work, but ok

Hey there. Not bad. I am pretty lenient on my voting and such.. mainly because I seriously can like pretty much anything posted. Anyways, this was pretty fun to me, although I would have really loved to have had some more to play with the demo. I would have liked to have atleast gotten the portal opened or tried, whichever you plan to place into the game. Aside from that, I can deal with the art style. I didn't think it was too bad really. I have seen much much worse. :P

Patience is a virtue

Obviously, someone needs to take more time on their games. The way the place was made just looked so bad. The boat, the house, and the character. I think the author must be a flash newb (I shouldn't be talking because I'm not even that yet), but don't send your stuff into newgrounds right away. For goodness sake, the girl stands in the same place everywhere you go. . EVERYWHERE!!! The buttons didn't even work when you pressed them. This needs allot of work.

work on it

the person crying constantly was annoying.
and i could see links with Kingdom Hearts.
work on the sound some more, when you click to go to another area the sound of one area gets mixed with the other area try and make it so that doesn't happen.

Didn't like it

The graphics and stuff were good i just didn't like it.