See what happens when Robots play tag.
BTW: This is my second flash ever, and my first submission. Dont give me crap about the sound or the choppiness, I cant help it (yet), and dont vote high cuz you feel sorry for me. Just judge and give pointers.
Thanks ^^
PS. Its not bad, watch it!
PPS. Ok ok... sure it has no storyline, or at the best a weak one, its a test. The sequel idea is now dead. It will never, EVER happen (thank god)
not bad
For your only flash on newgrounds, it was a pretty diecent flash. i've seen worse, so keep trying and you could make something frontpage someday. i thought is was funny because the ending was random, and there wasn't even a road that the robots played in. the music was also randomness.
good graphics, atleast for a second flash.
plus the music was funny, wich is something i think is very important. The chicken dance! yay!
A better storyline would have been a plus tough.
it wasnt that great...
it was ok for a first flash. I really do think it coulda been better. You should search for tutorials here on NG. They really help for a begginer! Its kinda good that you tried for some detail instead of the same old stick.....ish crap.
good luck
It's okay
I like your artwork. Story line is okay. The robots, however, look like they are from the cartoon series, Futurama. Mostly, it's original and fresh. Way to go.
((( A GOOD ONE HERE )))
Ha this is a good funny ol flash, made me laugh at the end, good image of a simple little robot, and nice backrounds btw, the ending was great, this film could turn into a nice little series, robots are cool, keep up the nice flash works...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: Robots get silly...
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