Umm...

No. The answer is no. Things did not flow well together for you. You had random ideas, and no conjunction.

Better luck next time.

Has potential...

Your animation is good, but the drawings themselves is fairly bad. Also, I suggest getting better sound, especially for the voices, not to mention the incredibly repetitive use of the sound. I'm suprised your score is doing so well, but I do hope you keep up your work even if I want to see this one blammed. Looking forward to see what you can do in the future.