This is much better than the first one as it shows obvious signs of improvment. I'm glad you sent me a message and respoded to my previous review as I was unaware that this was a learning process for you. I'm looking forward to seeing how your skills developed over this series and where the story will go. My lone complaint with this was that the episode was a tad too short. That and the lack of the walking movment, but you pointed that out already :P. Can't wait to see the rest.