ARGH!
why dont some people get it, never animate with ovals and circles! Use lines and then curve them, it looks millions of times better. Thats the only thing i noticed so
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It may be confusing for some people, but hey, its the first out of a 5 part series. So just wait until mission 2 for it to make more sense :p.
Very good.
Wow. That was a great movie. Music was great. Graphics were okay, but definitly need improvements. Make them look like real people, not ovals with heads and feet. Also the cars looked like crap. Guns were really good though. Pretty good though. I liked it. Nice work. Keep it up!
-TheSquirrelyOne
Broly238 responds:
Thank you, you are not so picky like most of the others. I think your the only one that really cared that it was my first one. I am working hard on the second one, putting new voices and things. But thank you a lot.
heh
u sound like dany from american history x
From the beggining,
I thought, "This is going to kick major ass!" I was dead wrong. The plot made NO sense! The animation (if you could call it that) was awefull. The voices were done extremely horribly. I will give you that the credits/preloader was done EXCELLENT. But, in the end, this turned out to be a 4 and a half meg pile o' crap deserving of blamnation. You need to SERIOUSLY work on your animation, the drawings were OK. I advise you to ask for voice actors on NG or from your friends. Try to cut down on the file size, anyone with dial up will be DEAD by the time it loads up. Add a play button so it doesn't freeze while it loads. Better sound FX would be a major plus. I liked how the people were drawn, they had a certain style to them that you should defenitely keep. I hope you can do bettter with part 2.
FANTASTIC sound
Animation needs work. Also, you need a better story.
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