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^^Good Points^^
A very odd storyline in this, but still very creative and very funny. I got that the guy wants to kill Jenny because she has inside jokes in her profile? That was kind of strange, but very funny. I liked the character you created, his voice overs were very good. The ending was hilarious too, I really laughed at this, "I will accept this citizenship award". Classic!
^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could use some improving. The guy's face wasn't very detailed, he didn't have eye details, and the animations were even worse. Also, the voice overs got hard to hear towards the middle of this.