needs more work.

This couldve been a lot better,you might need to work some more to get better,and keep your practice for yourself.

Jerky animation, bad graphics, and stupid sounds

If there was any intention of this other than being blammed I would be damned suprised. Even though this seriously just boils down to a worthless animation that shouldn't have even been submitted, I'll go through what should be improved. *Sigh* Concerning your graphics, you really need to learn how to use fills. There is absolutely no animation that can be good without some use of fills (yes, that means don't just use lines). Simple lines just don't cut it and especially when they take a total of a minute or less to form. The only reason you have a point for sound is because you bothered to put it. Unfortunately, repeated looping sounds that are annoying are exactly that: annoying. Don't do it again. Ever. This really just seemed more like you just learned how to use Flash and were testing out how stuff goes together. Unfortunately, Newgrounds is not a place to put your crappy animations where we are guinea pigs for them. Take some tutorials online, develop your art style (yes, use something original), and don't use one sound repeatedly. Hopefully, we'll see something worthy of viewing from you in a couple of months. There simply is no excuse for this. Try again.

boooooo....

or BLAM!!eathers good.

crap

sorry but i hate this

Ptoo! Ptoo! I spit on this piece of crap!

shit dude go back to third grade and learn how to draw!!!!