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^^Good Points^^
Looks like a pretty decent drawing, and you look like you know how to draw. You shaded pretty well and the shaping was nice as well.
^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's just a single frame with no animations. I'm not sure what you were trying to get across...maybe that orange is king of the portal and not SBC. But then why would he kill SBC? This just doesn't make sense.