good job!

I thnk you did a great job on this flash. looks like it was well planned and excuted. and i like that song where did you get it. am I going to see more like this?

cool

good job on this definatley good for a small laugh (the la's man the la's) anyway good job

Smooth, fun, and creepy :-)

Other than the strange "La la la la la...'s: and the strange brief credits music, this is a fabulous piece of noir. I realize that the La's were part of the song, and I'm not holding it against you, I'm trying to vote this up, but it's hard when nobody knows about it, should definitely be in the noir section.

Great!

That was very cool. Great graphics and everything. Very nice for your first. Excellent work. Keep it up!

The light in the distance.

It reminds me of The Great Gatsby, except no one gets hit by the car. Bravo, Chap.