whoa
woa this was funny man! but i think you shuold have let the note at the ens shown a little bit longer ok?
Author Comments
This is my 1st movie....2nd attempt. I submitted this just over a week ago, it had no sound and only 1 layer. Now its improved slightly, and I hope it has a chance of staying on newgrounds.
A good start...
Nice for a first movie, keep at it!
static
P.S. - thanks for using my music.
Umm....kind good for a begginer
if i could give you one piece of advice please put a replay and play button
Congratulations!
I actually blammed this the first time you submitted it, but I gave it a 5 this time.
No, I didn't like the movie any better. I was just glad to see that you made a sincere attempt to improve it, and that counts a lot to me.
Good job on getting it through, and welcome to Newgrounds.
Hmmmm.........However, if your score goes down and not up, you could end up with turd of the week!
Well, an award is an award.
Stefanio responds:
Thanks heaps! It was nice reviews that made me want to improve it and try again. Rest Assured I have learnt a lot from this one and expect my next one to be a big step forward...once again, thankyou very much for filling me with confidence.
Nice work
Keep at it, the animation was decent. File size was nice and small as well. The audio needs work.
Stefanio responds:
Thanks hepas, the positive feedback I'm getting back is awesome! I plan to improve on all my flash skills, and will have a better product soon I hope! Cheers!
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