lol

i have no idea where his nonsence came from, but as if i care

not bad

this was good, I'm only rating it good because I see this in extreme context to rise of the mushroom kingdom. Very similar only this could be differant in its manor. You did some loverly work, it needs a bit of touching up on those effects though. Luigi's writing is hard to read being green n'all with that back ground. And what the hell was the deal with Bowser and Mario? I didnt quite understand that bit but never mind. I'll check out the next peices too and see what they're worth. Good work and keep it up. ^_^ although definatly room for improvement. definatly, definatly wurd of the day!

10 for humor...

cuze no matter how many times i see Toad die, its just funny hehe. he seems to die in every move he is in on newgrounds lol. anyway not bad for sprits, luigi text hard to read work on that. also when it comes to the action sences in part 2 put in some good rock music. something to make us feel the action flowing. the mario old style tunes was a good touch but for the action part make it a bit more hardcore. all in all not bad man

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you submitted it twice??

Good attempt...

...but Luigi's text was painfully hard to read on that backdrop. Also, you might wanna consider editing out some of the traveling time, just to keep it short and sweet. I would also recomment grabbed sprite backgrounds to go along with the characters. Keep at it.