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the voice act suck, barely story, i guess it was alright tho

Needs a lot of work on this

The graphics were allright, but the sound needs a lot of work. There was a decent plot behind it, so you did alright there. Keep trying man.

Some OK Camera Shots

It was a little rough, but I liked the way you changed the camera view from close-up to long shot depending on the action. A lot of people don't think of doing that, but it really makes the scenes more interesting to watch.

I really liked the way you did the first guy running with the knife. The second guy wasn't as good--you can see the background through his open mouth.

Also, when you have two people talking to each other, don't put both exactly in the middle of the screen when you cut back and forth between them. Put the left one off to the left a bit and the right one off to the right.

This is especially important when they look very similar (two bald guys in black cloaks). For a second I thought it was the same guy talking when you cut to the second guy.

hm

mmuch better improvement on your first....yea, u lack what i lack, storyline, our senses of humour wins out, and we end up with something bloody that makes you laugh....anyway, nice work, love the more scenes, and ur artwork could use more improvement, just like mine, as like mine your talent is growing....

voices

the vocies were pretty funny, im not sure if they were ment to be , but i thought it was pretty funny. When they faught it was neat. When they were attacking there voicies were very funny. Nice work