It was good...

It had great use of perspective.
If I were you I would add shadows and more detail. A wire frame look just wont cut it.
Also I would try making it longer.
Also for the voice acting you could just do it your self with different voices.
So next time I would recommend improving the quality.

Anyways nice job. :P

Uuuuh

This one was really lame. The first one was kinda funny and cool, but this just sucked. You didnt put in any important information that would make anyone want to watch the next episode. It wasn't too bad, but I hope the next one is better. . . you need to step up with the story line.

jesus christ! how retarted was that

dude! that fuckin sucked!What the hell is the fuckin point of it! whata fucking waste of time.dude seriously DO NOT make another one of these just quit making flash alltogher.No voices & it was WAY to fuckin short.People dont even WASTE TIME with this shit.Just click back and watch something else anyone who enjoyed this cartoon need to get their throat slit!!!do not even WATCH!

The creator of this flash is a fucking moron alltogher.

Ryan,

Your series sucks so bad

Why are you so fucking overrated? Do you pay people to give you a good score? I have no idea how you even made it to the top five with this half-ass piece of shit movie. Your characters are lame and your storyline is unoriginal, corny, and just plane stupid. I feel bad for all the people that work hard at making flash movies and then submit them only to find out some piece of shit like this bumps them down by wrongfully getting a spot in the top five. Do everyone a favor and stop making this wannabe attempt at a series.

:)

Very nice, the graphics weren't great, but they were ok and the sound was very good. But the only bad thing about this is your spelling but I think it will improve :) This is very nice (I love film noirs ;) ) Keep up the good work!
Gildraz