suggestions.

ok first things first. i liked it for one. lol so please dont take any offence to my next few comments. firstly, there are some parts, like when the guy was on the ground bleeding, you can see where the blood stops a frame or so later. you are very good. you just need to keep working on it. you will get better and better. ^_^ well other then that i dont realy have anything else to say, other then i liked it and keep it up. ^_^

It was okay.

To the last reviewer: It's a fucking cartoon. Who gives a shit if it's a real gun? It's retards like you who drop the scores on good submissions.

dude wtf

that gun was like so not real i know about guns and that shit did not exist and by the way your violence sucked balls good idea but the fucking wrong person to carry it out

Improve

You need some better graphics and a better story line.

well..................................

The story and information was good but otherwise..................... .............................. .............................. ...........IT SUCKED ASS!