http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=128050 copy and paste that link into your web browser for part 2 :)
This is my third flash animation. my first one got blammed, my second, well, im ashamed of it. this is a little bit better than them, (it actually has a bit of a story, heh) so judge fairly and dont blame insantly just because of my other lousy failures.
Update :-
Thanks for both the posotive and negative reviews guys, its always good to see a few posotives in there to keep me going, but also a few negatives to show that theres always room to improve. I'll be experimenting with good fight scenes more often, and i'll attempt to make more battle scenes better and longer on episode 2. Keep posted!
Interesting
I think it was pretty good, except for some of the animations. The part where the peasant guy fights with the other guy didn't go very smoothy. It was kinda hard to understand the whole situation. I wasn't sure who was who, or who did what. Also, it would've been better with more sound effects.
wasnt that good
i didnt really find it interesting. was really bored watching this...
not bad but not good
the music in the begining was annoying and we saw were shadows over all i hated it but the quality was good
i liked it
very nice. the intro make me want to see the next part. 2 magicians having a small confrontation, which i would hope will turn into a much bigger conflict. my only complaint is the characters are not revealed in the begining, making it hard to figure out who they are in the next installment. still, can't wait for the next episode...
Whoa, nice.
First thing's first: My compliments on the total, it turned out really good. But.... A few flaws here: I think you overdid it with either the quality of the background or the quality of the sound, or both. Flaw number two: The all black figure thing might be good for the intro, but some color (doesn't matter if it looks like some crappy gnome or a messed up version of tricky the clown, just something!) would be nice. That is all I guess... Oh, and I see you drew the intire scene with the brush. How? Well, you missed a few spots on the roof of a house. A more failsafe way to do this is to draw the outlines and fill it up.