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well, first off, you don't even specify what these "samples" are, shich kind of ruins any and all story line, and then there's just some mindless violence accompanied by a good song (i would be insulted if i was drowning pool) and then it cuts to this HORRIBLE song which ruins it yet again and then there's kind of a punchline that isn't really a punchline. all in all, i've seen better, but don't give up. just practice (a lot).