Not Bad

For your first submission this has a lot of potential. The only real problems I saw were your voicing was a little slow. You need to make everything more real time. He'd ask a question and about a minute later he'd get a response. Other than that great job I liked to see some 3d movement in there no first timers normally have that program/skill.
Only problem is stick killing gets a bit old. Great gun animation though your shots were great. The entry blood pool was a bit shitty but the rest was fine. Keep it up. PS voted a 3

Well

Not bad the stic animation sorta dulled it out but still a good flash to see. The story was a bit hard to cath but still went along well. Also the music wasnt to bad. Once the story got goin it went pretty solid. Nice violence and guns overall a pretty decent flash. Nice way to start series.

i got a few questions

who got killed? his wife an kid? or his parents? who killed them? what kinda dudes that kill ppl have a skyscraper with the logo hitmen on it? how did he know that those particular guys whacked his folks? where did he get his guns from? these are i think the loop holes of your story, the overall concept is good, but you need to make out a better storyline, hopefully you will accomplish this in your next offering. but a good movie anyway, sounds good too! get better.

Well done just a few things

the sound of the voice could of been better, but i liked well done!

Stoel

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