At least you TRIED to make a good flash... It wasn't funny.... Try again
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This Flash is my first actual "completed" Flash movie. I spend exactly one month doing this, hoping it would turn out alright.
I dont know how to add the music credits on the side... I used Offspring's "Origional Prankster" and Goldfinger's "Counting the days"
Peace out
Nice, Santos
Hey! Cest moi, I decided to check out your flash movies... and I loved it, this is hilarious... I like cats! LOL! I seriously hope you make another one... *shifts eyes* myess..
good, but could be better
It was funny and well thought out, lol my favourite part was the hemroid cream lol. But you should work on the sound and the way the characters move their mouths, but besides that it was kool!
Wow! Weekly top 20 on your first attempt!
Good show. :)
I think it might have been nicer if you'd not just used solid colours for everything, but at least this way it's got something of an individual style.
Although the animation is simple, it is rather nice to look at.
The music is well-suited and the voices are decent. However, the loud bit of music at the start drowns out some of the voices. Next time, try to get a song that stays more consistent in volume.
'Counting The Days' was also an excellent choice of song for the end.
The story was an enjoyable watch, perhaps because it deals with a subject that we'll all have experienced. However, I think if you kept at it and made a series so we could get to know the characters, it might be a more enjoyable watch.
Will you be making more movies with the same characters then?
CopyCatDS responds:
Well, first off, the solid characters are part of the style i use. I also have been told about how the music gets too loud for the voices to hear, i'll get this cleared up. And as for the final question, i will be making movies with the same characters, but every episode will hopefully include a new main character along with the four. Also from time to time, i may change the looks on a character, so that they may look different for the next episode...
Thanks for the good comments! and enjoy my movie!
Good job.
For a first flash attempt nice, better than some of these other guys I see out here.
I'll give you some advice too,
On your characters skin, next time use a background that doesn't look like their skin all to much otherwise it looks like eyes a mouth and nose talking on the wall.
Voices, if you have a microphone put something fuzzy on it like a sock and such so you don't get the harsh sound sometimes, and make the voice acting a little louder and clearer.
-other than that I like this flash, and if people give you shit about it, just know its hard to come up with shit like this and they can kiss the bright side of your ass for critizing you on it. make more~
later