ehhh
nothing against you, but there is definately room for improvement. it didnt really thrill me at all. you do have alot of potential, but i think you didnt try hard enough on this one. i hope to see better things from you.
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First of all, this movie doesn't have a loader, so give it like 30 seconds, OK.
This is the first movie i submit, so don't expect TOO much.
After I read Chief Seatle's letter, I decided to do this movie, in fact is my Literature homework, but I was running out of time, so it could have been better.
Good
Really good and i am glad ur not just submitting rubbish becasue u think your great. OK, the ways to improve this would be, hey don't be imbarrsed that u can't program a preloader, just download the NG one, it works fine, you can find it in learning flash section when submitting a movie. Good use of sprite art but sometimes i didn't know what the hell was going on. Maby try to include some speach.You have potential, do not let it die.
Great!
For a first flash, this is pretty damn good, and I'm not just influenced by all of the NES Mega Man connections.
This could be better with a bit more time taken care of, possibly by adding a preloader and a start button.
Make the movie a bit longer, with more of a storyline, and you'll have a great movie.
This is good enough as is though.
Nice stuff, keep it up!
((( COOL )))
Ya a good sprite film with originality and style, the type of sprites is what made it so cool, and the backrounds matched so well, fun to watch aswell, nice job...
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Good work
I know the guy who made this...lol, I sit next to him. Hey great work man, how long did u take to do it? Why didn´t uo tell me u were doing it? Lol, nice story man, keep up the good work.
Wey, neta te luciste cabron! bien hecho!