Well...
I liked your font! But other than that it looks incomplete, and it looks like you didn't put much effort into it. Lessen up the text unless you have animation with it.
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EDITED SOMETHING.
Part one in a series.
It's a rewrite of the Matrix, so different thing's happen at different times, as you can see.
Ideas? Suggestions? Review it, and I'll get back to you and probably take your ideas and put them in.
I agree with what everyone else said...
even though I didn't look at it.
Just a guy inflating his voting power (at no cost to you).
er..
not too bad, but the dialogue went too fast to read, seeing how it is grey against a red background. The color sceme really helps set the *mood of the piece* though.
You could do better
It was incredibly short, this hsouln't be part one, it should be a teaser trailer for part one. Not very interesting, short, repetitive, although I do enjoy the isual style.
Hmm..
I didn't really care much for it... The animation wasn't that great and the sound was really repetitive. The only thing cool about it was; I was working on an animation called The Mattrix at one point, because my name is Matt and me and my friends thought it would be cool to make The Mattrix.
