it was prety good idk wat the second guy below says ur good but it was a tiny bit choppy good try
... it was ok
kinda a choppy but better stop motion animation than I could do
To start, do not listen to CC-FlashWorks' comments. This is an animation, and it does belong on Newgrounds. "Stop Motion Animation." I love stop motion albeit it clay, toy, or anything else. You show great promise. :) The only things you need to do is lower the file size by 3,000k or more, and give more of a plot in your movies.
Ok, Before i review i should let you know I do not consider you a Flash Animator. In no way is this flash work at all (which really means it shouldnt be on here...) but to be fair ill grade you on Stop-Motion making.
It was ok. You could take the time to take about double the pictures you did so it will be smoother. Yes i know the filesize right! Thats why you split it into 2 parts and submit them at the same time. Work on it.
Ok thanxs its screwed up!
it was good nice work