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This is my 2nd cartoon. I appreciated the advice on the first, and I hope this one is an improvement!

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Gah, why didn't I realize?

Gah, if I had known it was stolen, I would have blown the whistle on it.

I gave you full credit for it. ;o

wow

so true, so sad (for stumpy), and so well done!!

nice

i luv it

Great!

An award on this one too!!!Man,it looks like you got an award on every movie you make!!!Keep making movies like this,i hope you get up to daily 1st place sometime.

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Good, though a bit slow.

I watched this as you suggested watching it before the sequel.

I thought your graphics were generally good, and the music a good choice.

In future, ALWAYS set background music to 'stream'. That will ensure that it synchs up to the graphics and so you'll be able to match the animation to the beat with more confidence.

Also, you'll be able to match up graphics to the music more easily, as the sound will play when you 'scrub' the timeline.

My main criticism is that the movie as a whole seems a bit slow and lacks enough elements to make it really interesting.

After the boy ran away for the first time, I thought for a few seconds that the animation might have looped itself.

You should really make it a bit different the 2nd time the butterfly flys by.

Maybe even add some other elements, like grass blowing or something.

It'd increase your workload, but make for a more interesting watch.

As it is, it was largely the music that made this enjoyable at all to watch.

Well, I'm interested to see whether your 3rd submission is an improvement or not. :)

By the way, I'd just like to say how impressed I am by the quality of this when you say how short a while you've been using FLash for.

I'm not going to give you any charity points, but to have gotten this good so quickly... wow! You must have some real talent!

Stay funky,
Bez

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Uploaded
Sep 16, 2003
11:19 AM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place September 17, 2003