Ahh, nicely done.
I liked your idea that you riffed on here. The intro was very dramatic. Although, the text box was a bit too cramped and hard to read. I realize that having that font ups the drama feeling but also made it a bit harder to read which , at some level, detracts from viewer pleasure.
Overall, I think this was maybe an 8.5 rounded up toa 9. It was very good and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I guess I go on to part II now to see more story unfold?
Truthfully, I didnt expect much, but It was good. More of these would be awsome, and I forgot that it was old too! Unbeleivable. I give it a 9, there is much room for improvement.
Fantastic start, which only gets better. Considering I really enjoy giving animation-authors heaps, I surprised myself that there is so little to compain about here.
The humour is a bit... Weak, but I'm sure it was funnier back when it was released.
i like it
please make some more of this