Story is nice
So I really like how this story plays out and the music is really good, I still think you need to lose that next scene button it is really not needed. but one thing you need the most here is the "VOICES" and some voice dialog, it would really make this series alot better.
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I still think you need to lose that next scene button it is really not needed. and voice dialog is much needed.
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