could use some work
Pretty good work actually but could use abit fine tunning, some small stuff like backround detail and more effects. but for the mostpart it was entertaining
Entertaining but needs some improving
~X~
Author Comments
I am done with the final episode. But the size is to big so I am fixing that up. I will have posted shortly. Oh and e mail me if thier is anything else like comments, sugestions. ThanX
I changed the brieng me to life song
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So, do you consider this part two, and thee preview you sent part 1? I liked the preview quite a bit. Very nice choice of music. Ok, during the end battle, if you were not going to use music, or sound effects, you should of tried to add voices. I like it a lot, the character designs were good, and the movements have gotten quite a bit better since the preview. Hope to see part 3.
Ryan
Nice...
I thought the artwork on the dark angel was awesome. I thought all the artwork was great actually. The music was good a fitted in nicely. I also liked the angel feather in the beginning. I think that feather helped set the tone for this Flash. The only thing I think that may be added is Sound Effects and maybe Voice Acting but I dont care this Flash is already Good enough. KEEP IT UP!
great
i liked your intro your last one and when i asked for t you definately gave its more beautiful then the last one but use spell check
Very nice
I like the story-line that you put in this, most stuff doesn't usually have one. There are some flashes that give you goosebumps when they are done with the intention of being good. The mix of sound with the storyline works very well for this. I think your drawings could still use some refinement, but your animation was pretty smooth. Also try to add more sound than just music. Good job!