ok, needs work

The story seems pretty cool, but there are several flaws that could be pointed out: After the kid kills himself and falls, it looks unnatural; The part where he was an angel-type dude looked kinda awkward, everything after the suicide part was out of proportion; The part where he is raising the sword to fight, it looks like someone else is holding it. One solution to the sword part is to draw out the entire torso and arms, even though ultimately parts of them will be cut off. That way, you can ensure it doesn't look weird.

7

Nice use of music. I liked your character's looks. I think the full version will be something to see. Keep up the good work.

Ryan

beautiful

great work but next one have a fight scene i do understand the value of the story thats what the first one did it told us the story or more likely his story good work

Good message

great movie to just send out a message..nice graphics and the music was great. This moive was pretty powerful and i understand its meaning.

cool

It took its time to load but worth the wait i say I voted this a 5 my friend ;) I liked the start/intro with the feather etc. The music went really well. The characters were cool This certainly deserves a score higher than 3/5 in my eyes well done my friend!